Funny. Haha, I like the new insult "Cog". The preloader was pretty nice, I liked how the Newgrounds tank sort of waved out. The writing could have been a little more legible, i suggest the line tool. Anyway, good stuff. See-ya, cog face. 10/10
I'll start using the line tool when I want to start putting effort into my flashes.
The concept and all was great, but the execution of it seemed slightly similar to "A Drawing For Mum". This one lost a point for originality there, unfortunately. The artwork seemed a bit sloppy, maybe using the line tool a bit more? The line tool is great for clean, smooth graphics and its east to use! When you get the time check out some of the art tutorials in the flash help section on Newgrounds, it has loads of great tuorials for drawing! I say you should check them out.
No offense, but i did not quite find the intended humor in there....Didn't the kid say to the dad it was a drawing for mum then the dad said it did not look like him? I kinda got lost at that point. Also about the lip syncing, it seemed a little off. You know if you press enter while making the movie it plays it in the time line so that means you can do perfect lip syncing, you should try that out it would do great! And the voice, maybe try not breathing into the microphone it seemed to make some sort of crackly breathing sound which lowered the quality of the audio resulting in a bad voice to lip sync to.
I hope that helps!
Some parts were great! But some parts were terrible and needed extreme improvement, i will not name who's parts did just so they don't get sad or anything. The music was not very great, it did not seem to have any sort of action or excitement to keep me watching the whole movie. The menu was good, but it was very strange and random. But i must say, some peoples parts made no sense and did not have anything to do with the collab!
Good work, but theres nothing practice can not make better, just a little more practice and you will be getting front pages heaps!!
I am so giving this a 10, look at the great lip syncing. Great work! Seriously keep it up!
That Was Great! it went for sooo long. Everything was great and all...but i think these images you put in kinda ruined it, like its all animated and out of nowhere this pixelated stretched bitmap comes out of nowhere. Just take those pics out and you will have something really great.
I loved it, The main thing i want to say is EXCELLENT filter use and great clean graphics. The sounds also fitted perfectly. But the battle seemed a bit dragged out. Overall Great Work!
That flash took months to make?!?!?! Seriously it is not a flash and should not be on a flash website. If you look at the guys you mixed some play dough with each other and wrecked them. And putting in that white noise screen over it certainly told me you made allot of mistakes and wanted to cover them up. No offense but that was really really bad. Try harder next time.
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